All Comments on 'Choices Ch. 01'

This was an extremely well written story which aroused me no end.

I have two sisters who are very beautiful but I've never thought of them in an erotic sense, so have never really had any leaning towards incestuous stories.

This one however, has changed my mind and aroused in me an interest in a subject which I now find sexually exciting. No, I still can't think of my own sisters in this way but then again, perhaps that's a good thing?

I do hope there'll be more to this story - you've closed to leave behind an unusual situation but you've also left matters open enough to go in any direction with a sequel. Well written and well done in my opinion.

WOW!!!Super incest!!

this was excellent, please write more.

I love reading female authors, a peek into the female mind. And I love true stories, as rare as the are. Are you really female and did this really happen? I don't know but it was a good read nonetheless. What happened next, did you take it further?

The story flows nicely, and the sex fits well and is very hot. Looking forward to more!

First of all, I thought this story was super hot and I take it for what it is. It's an erotic story not Shakespeare so I don't usually get hung up on details. However the first anonymous poster here is a total idiot. You must live in a state where you have to be 21 to get tattoos, but in Ohio you only have to be 18 to go without your parents. Also, I personally have a friend who at 20 years old got kicked out of college for fighting and his Uncle actually loaned him money to open a tattoo shop. Therefore both of those aspects of the story are fully believable and maybe YOU should do your research before you leave such a negative comment. To the author: please continue this story and soon!

Thank all of you who left comments and voted, even those of you who didn't leave favorable ones. I appreciate all of you. The second chapter of this story is about 60 percent finished at this point, it should be done soon!

u have good insight but should write about the real flashing and teasing. sibling relationships can be fun and very beneficial to both

Please continue on with your story. I enjoyed it so far and would like to read part two.

Very interesting and I can't wait till the next chapter, Very well written. Thanks for your time and effort.

What a great first effort, very erotic, really looking forward to chapter 2.

Thanks you,

Hey I bet if u left that mask sit out somewhere in ur room and left ur door open ur brother would see it and I bet he would get to thinking ...anyways way to go after what it is that u want ....nice trick by the way wish my sister misty would do that to me and trick me into fucking her.....lol well let's hear more

I really enjoy ur story, Hope that is a next chapter so u can claim ur man.

please hurry with the second chapter. I don't normally comment on incest stories, but I am reading this for the third time this week and I am trilled to see what happens next. Maybe you can have Brandon play dumb to his sister;s game, and when the moment is right he will surprise her.

Sis gets her pussy stretched by her brother's big cock and has another girl take credit for it.

Sis has some really hard decisions to make to get her brother back inside of her pussy.

The truth usually works.

A good story, thanks for the read.

SO FAR SO GOOD. I WANT TO SEE IF IT STANDS UP OVER TIME.

1) this family has some "Real issues" 2) Sister's seduction should be interesting.