All Comments on 'Choices Pt. 02 - Freedom'

Sequel Please. I would love to see their parents walk in on them while they are fucking each other and Nikki tell them that they as siblings had two choices to make after the ordeal at the hotel. Explain their two choices while naked and then pull their parents into the incest as well.

By far the weardist and best 2 part incest story I have ever read on here very nice work and look forward to more of your work!

I have never finished reading a non-con story before so this is the exception. Once I started reading I couldn't stop. It held my interest. You did such a good job of getting inside Nicole's head and communicating that to the reader.

Thank you for one of the best brothers/sisters stories ever this story needs to be considered for the hall of fame... Would love for a third chapter where they move in together or that thier parents join them for some fun...thank you for one of the best incest stories i have ever read..

I have been reading stories at Literotica for over 15 years and also following your work. This series is easily in the top 5 of all stories I've read in this site. You're work just keeps getting better.

Well written with an excellent flow and build up. I loved every minute it took me to read it!

Would love to see one more chapter as an epilogue.

I didn't see Pt. 1 when it came out but I took your advice and read it first, which of course really is necessary. I'd echo an earlier comment that it was hard to put down although it wasn't at times an easy read. I'd love a sequel but maybe it's not in the cards. I also appreciated you frankness on editing. Yes I found mistakes, more in Pt. 1 than 2 but they were there but your openness got me past the more than it would otherwise. Looking forward to reading other stories you have written.

Normally incest stories aren't my cup of tea and part one of this was so blisteringly tragic and disturbing I was hesitant to read this. I'm glad I made the decision to though because you found a way to bring a bit of triumph out of the horror of part 1. I am....impressed.

Beautiful story and really great writing. You are really talented.

I never thought porn could make me feel so many different emotions! I honestly

Loved this it felt so real and so fufilling to read

It is rare that I find a book that I just can't put down. The same is true of this story. The characters and their emotions were very real. Many of us have an epiphany in life where we realize that we control our own destiny. That we make the choices and we don't have to only do what other's think is right. Thank you for giving us all a little more freedom to be ourselves.

Initially I wanted part 1 to be longer, to have the Scooby gang play longer and harder at Iris' hands, but having read part 2, I understand why you ended part 1 so abruptly. The story pulled me. I loved Nicole. Her courage and insight fueled the story and the sex. The sex was so well captured, and so well written, that it's at the top of my list of personal favorites. Very very hot! I thought the theme of redeeming oneself by embracing one's wounds, and thus making them something else was very well done. I would livwelivwe to read another snapshot to see how this works out for all the players, and how they can accommodate this part of their lives into future relationships.

I love this story it's really hot. You do a great job with descriptions and your not afraid to go to some really kinky places.

This story is definitely one of the hottest but what lacked is the significance amount of dirty talk among the siblings. It would have been 10 times hotter with dirty incest talks. Regardless A fantastic read

This story stands out for me. I keep coming back to it. There's an actual narrative arc with conflict being overcome with things that really matter on the line. The characters each have character, they aren't just defined by their physical attributes. I preferred part 1, but as a whole the story is better than its parts.

This story could have been done with four friends, but the incest angle makes it more fun. The kinkiness is just on the right side of believable which is ideal. You also really captured the wrongness and inner turmoil of Nicole which makes the fantasy even better. I would ask for more, but a third part might risk the perfection of this story.

This story, along with your other incest stories are written with enough skill that they are very believable. Not having to suspend disbelief makes them supremely hot and erotic. Definitely a favorite.Thank you.

I'm not a fan of femdom (Iris) nor of orgy scenes, but you managed to keep my attention through both chapters. The end of Chapter 2 was a bit abrupt, and needs another chapter to address what they choose and how it changes them. Are they getting together occasionally to strengthen their bonds, or do other issues get in the way? Do their feelings change over time, or will (cliche alert!) love conquer all?

It's time to revisit this tale. Bring it to a proper literary ending.

Definitely need a loooooong sequel. While 2nd part is still good, ended a bit abrupt

I definitely believe this story need at least a thrid chapter. Too good to end it here...

Definitely needs a third chapter to address what transpires when mom and dad get home. From the earlier part when they said they had a reservation, they obviously knew something was going to happen. Plus, their bedroom must smell of sex not to mention any stains on the carpet . . . .

After the time that has elapsed, I doubt that a third chapter of this story will be forthcoming, but I also believe that it would be a welcome addition. Brilliant story, well written! The structure and pacing are almost perfect, but above all it was enormously entertaining. Thanks a million! Five enthusiastic Stars for me!