All Comments on 'Choices to Make [Life or Love]'

I liked it post more please really good story

Thank you very much for your feedback. The second chapter is awaiting approval right now and I'm writing the third one. ^.^

I hope you'll continue to enjoy it. :D

To anyone reading this, please feel free to comment. I'm happy to go through and respond. I'm certainly open to critique as well.

Have a great holiday season everyone !

Very well written. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Very enjoyable. I look forward to more.

I love that you used the word, "belied" correctly. One slight ittty bitty nit pick though; several times you followed the word 'try' with 'and' but this is not correct. Try to fly, try to smile, try to stay awake.... We don't try and carry, we try TO carry.

this is one really great story looking forward to reading more