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pops12345pops12345almost 6 years ago
Good work overall

A few grammar errors but otherwise it was good read. Nice work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More please

This story was fun, but felt rushed after the sex scene. Make it more flushed out and turn it into a series please!!

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"Realizing my dream had come true, realizing that this fantasy was happening right now, I went into a kind of shock. I could have sworn that my heart had even stopped, maybe time had even stopped..." https://www.patreon.com/Baubleheadz For your enjoyment, I offer character dri...