All Comments on 'Choose!'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
LMFAO

Pretty hilarious, albeit a bit confusing at the end. 5* just for the laughs.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
That was fun

That is one of the best laughs I have had in a while. Keep it up , maybe get a spell checker but no worries 5 stars are nowhere near ebnough for that chapter roll on the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

I'm glad to see your back working, but maybe lighten up on the actual game that breaks up the sex. Aside from a couple mistakes, it's still excellent

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Finally

I love reading these kinds of stories. I'd have to agree in saying adding a few more sex parts would enhance the story. Can't wait for the next one!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

I love how he references that there needs to be less game in the sex game in the story XD

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Man, i really LOVE your stories! you wrote some of the best stuff

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