by Ragnarok385
Pretty hilarious, albeit a bit confusing at the end. 5* just for the laughs.
That is one of the best laughs I have had in a while. Keep it up , maybe get a spell checker but no worries 5 stars are nowhere near ebnough for that chapter roll on the next one.
I'm glad to see your back working, but maybe lighten up on the actual game that breaks up the sex. Aside from a couple mistakes, it's still excellent
I love reading these kinds of stories. I'd have to agree in saying adding a few more sex parts would enhance the story. Can't wait for the next one!
I love how he references that there needs to be less game in the sex game in the story XD