All Comments on 'Choose Own Piss Adventure Ch. 01'

Super hot <3 Please write more!

An absolutely great story! Especially being that it's about lesbian urine drinking. Being able to choose how your piss fantasy turns out makes it very exciting to read.. I just wish it was longer.

I'm really hoping you continue. That was an awesome choose your own story and really well executed.

Dear Kingshogi, Very imaginative approach! The alternate states are sufficient to allow a multitude of erotic episodes to flash past the reader. It might be more effective to length each alternate state with a little more detail, but the back and forth is quite innovative. Well done!

Keep up the good work.

Loved it. Keep it up.

Would you be ok with republishing this story on chyoa.com? Interactive stories really don't work too great on literotica