by Arraiga
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Love the beginning! You have definitely set the foundation for a great read! Please continue.
Please continue!
Really needs to go on after this cliffhanger, great work!
gimme more. I'm hooked. good work.
Ed
Just joking - it was a very good story :) 5*
That made me laugh, I just might make him glitter a little now
I love this guy he's interesting please continue this story
Ed had me laughing at even the most serious parts. Let's read some more!
terrific! are you still writing? pls continue!