All Comments on 'Choto Temple Ch. 02'

That every woman wants a piece of, natch. But you are going so slow, its easy to lose interest. Nothing of much interest has happened so far. You are so intent on being subtle and cagey that you are being tedious and distracting. Still withholding rating, but this chapter is a 3 or a 4.

I would encourage you to ignore comments like the one below. The pace of the story is fine, at least for people with a brain. Long stories need long introductions and character development. This story is moving along just fine. My only nitpick would be that you needn't divide the chapters up so small.

asianToy

Reading this years later, I have to agree with the other Anon that the story is a bit too much of a slow burn