by songwriter503
But to address Anonymous, sometimes sex is without apparent meaning. It's a story and in this case the characters have meaningless sex. I for one will wait to see if all encounters are like that, in which case I'll join you in being disappointed.
asianToy
Other than that they are getting paid to fuck, on camera. Your story reads like your characters are getting paid to fuck, on paper. So so far, its kind of puzzling, and empty.