All Comments on 'Choto Temple Ch. 05'

So, the scientist Charity didn't plan to tell her husband (presumably EVER) about getting "inoculated", and now Zerlinski has just revealed her secret to a JOURNALIST? After saying he was still in contact with her? And also revealing where she worked? And her real name? And more than enough details about her for anyone to figure out who she was even if he didn't give her real name? Pretty dubious ethics there, IMHO.

Ok, sorry. You cleared up the problem with Charity in the next chapter. lol Should have read further before commenting.

y'know, you probably should have made the effects something a bit more pressing than a resistance to one type of cancer. Like it's not nothing, but it's not something most girls live it fear over either.