All Comments on 'Choto Temple Ch. 14'

Good story but you never really finished it hope you come back and put the finishing touch to it

This was written so well, with such good pacing to the various reveals, that I kept forgetting I was reading literotica. Very well done.

As a denial submissive, I found it very interesting and compelling. I admire the Choto girls' dedication... I would not be nearly that strong. The control—as with Rie—is a big thing for me. I would rather give up control than have orgasm, although sometimes the margin between those two choices shrinks dramatically...