All Comments on 'Chris and Janet, Birthday Present'

by rlaubert

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smalldickblueballssmalldickblueballsabout 6 years ago
What a story!

This is the best written LOVE STORY I have ever read! I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Confusing

A little information on the woman would be nice and the background. Need an editor!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
not really

I wouldn't call it horrible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excellent story

and well written. Maybe your story will awaken some of those reading it will comprehend the difference between the sex act and making love. Far, far too many couples end up destroying a marriage be choosing to only have sex. They never truly create a marriage because they rely only on sex and ignore a true commitment to their husband or wife. Yes, I've ignored the lesbo, queer, etc. as I do not believe in such "couplings".

Thanks for your story, written by an author.

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