All Comments on 'Chrissy's Trip to the Clinic'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
need more keep going

good start keep going what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
hot

nice work - you should have waited till the doc came in the girls mouth and then had him and the dad high - fiving over her naked body, her getting up groggy with cum leaking from her mouth and her pussy -

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
daum my panties are soaked

soaked

Daddysgirl1978Daddysgirl1978about 17 years ago
Mmmmmm

Great start! Can't wait to see what happens next, sincerely hope there is a next chapter. You had me soaked and my pussy throbbing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
What a start !

Very hot beginning. Hope that there will be a next chapter. There is still one hole to check ...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
fantastic!!

OH YES THATS THE BEST INCEST IVE EVER READ!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Smoking Hot

This was the hottest incest story I've ever read. Hope there is more to come... will be waiting with soaked panties!!

bouncytig06bouncytig06about 17 years ago
MMMM love ur stories

Told you this was good babes when you let me have first glance. God ur hot make me wet all the time luv ur adopted niece xx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Good story

Good hot story. My only comment is it would have been more exciting if they both had her, unknowingly.

StargazeStargazeabout 17 years ago
Great story

I enjoyed your story and I am glad I could help you out. :)

mikej2358mikej2358about 17 years ago
hot hot hot

Damn that story was hot, had me stroking my hard dick on every word, keep it up. cause its keeping my dick up.

AmyfriendAmyfriendalmost 17 years ago
From cool to HOT!

It started out as a HO HUM story but quickly gained momentum and warmed Chrissy from the inside, out.. I MUST have that Doctor's name...ha ha. Nicely done and remember folks its just a story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I loved every second of it...

The last line Was "I was so ashamed and I loved every second of it!!"......Well let me tell you, that was, far and away the most exciting story I've ever read. I'm not ashamed and I loved every second of it! Someone needs to make a movie like this. I'll play Dad or the doctor for free. Where are the girls who love medical erotica? I need one! Will travel!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
ang lupit...................

putang ina ang lupit ng storie mo brodmmrm ur pinoy fan

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
loved it- keep it cumming

loved your story, it is probably a personification of most fathers secret but totally unaccepted desire, to be the one special first one in their daughters life. I am not talking about realisation of this but of those delicious taboo thought that inhabit the dark hidden recesses of our minds.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
wow

that was incredibly hot. my pussy is literally dripping! thanks for sharing.

GizmorGizmorover 13 years ago
Chrissy

HOT, HOT, HOT!!!

BiancaMmmmBiancaMmmmover 13 years ago
Like most of your stories...

... very, very hot. I like your writing style and loved this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Unable to hold it.

This story is so hot that I shot my load all over the Monitor Screen. Even though I know that this is only fiction, I can truthfully say it does happen as my wife was taken many times by her Gyno.

daddyjoydaddyjoyabout 13 years ago
Cum-tastic!!

That is the secret dream I have wanted to happen to me every time I go to the doctor's office!! Something so hot about an older man having complete control of an everyday situation and you are laying there naked before him and at his mercy!

OH, mercy, mercy me!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
hot

I love this story and all the others that you write I would like to read more about chrissy's trip to the clinic where her dad got her pregent that 1st time and he has to take her back and they do more to her

LolitaXXXLolitaXXXalmost 13 years ago
mmmmmmm!

Sooo hot! I love that she was at her daddy's and her doctor's mercy. Lolita would love to be that baby girl! mmmmmmmm!

CuriousAusGalCuriousAusGalalmost 13 years ago

Good Lord. You pushed most of my buttons with that one. Not only did we have incest, but a loss of virginity and a doctor/patient story where the doctor abuses his position. Some of my favourite things all rolled up into one.

Some part of me should probably have been paying attention to typos or grammar or something, but damn, as if I could actually think about the rules of English while reading that. Very, very hot. Thanks for the ride.

P.S. And if my kids weren't home, I would totally have been frigging myself silly over this. Good work.

PurrfectKitten22PurrfectKitten22almost 13 years ago
shocking but in a good way

This surprised me. I've never read anything like it. I feel almost high though. Lol. I'm glad you stopped it where you did... I think the consequences of what had gone on would have been too outrageous for words and would have killed the mood. But in the fantasy world this was hot as hell and I'm squirming in my chair.

LustyDragonLustyDragonover 12 years ago
I loved every second of it!

GREAT!!

gypseykittengypseykittenover 12 years ago
Wow,

Really really yummy, absolutely loved it!!!! I wish this happened to me!!

oneoflifesjewelsoneoflifesjewelsover 12 years ago
HOT!

All I can say is HOT! More on this story, please.

BumbleBea1BumbleBea1about 12 years ago
Wow

I can't get enough of this story, everytime I read it I can't help myself... Such a turn on.

CoventinaNyxCoventinaNyxalmost 12 years ago
Great

More like this please!

isubmit2uisubmit2uover 11 years ago
What's that doctor's number?

The idea of being shared by Daddy and doctor is wonderful! So many things he can show them how to enjoy having such knowledge of the female anatomy and she certainly seems willing...wish it was me!

sassysuzazsassysuzazover 11 years ago
loved this story!

This story so turned me on. I love the idea of being molested by a gyno, then add the daddy angle and the sharing of the girl. Hotttt. Thanks for making me cream.

abby4u2abby4u2over 11 years ago
Awesomely hotttttt

for any submissive girl...this is so erotic. Loved it! MORE!

LitNymphoSlaveLitNymphoSlaveover 11 years ago
Pretty hot, not my favorite though

The concept is really hot, esspecially the GYN fucking the girl (I want a doctor like that!) and the daddy/daughter angle is always nice. As a super submissive girl, I liked how she had no choice in what the men were doing to her. But the one thing I didn't like was that she didn't know they were molesting her. It's so much hotter when she knows, so she can fight it at first until she gives in to the pleasure

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
examination of sherry

it would make a good storie if the doc examined chrissys mum sherry with here husband helping out

leathercatsuitgirlleathercatsuitgirlabout 11 years ago
Lovely

Just wondered if Dr Perkins could cum to see my 2 daughters - examine them both in front of me

Lovely story

Sarah Leather

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
...

Words escape me. I want it so badly now.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
The Best Story

This is the best and most erotic story I've ever read. I would have loved having a doctor like this. I know seeing a gynecologist was very erotic for me, I always got wet and loved itr.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Jacking baby

Man this the hottest story ever. I have read it 15 times in the last month and have shot a huge load of come every time. I have had oral sexwith my sisters and fucked one of my cousins. But a dad fucking his virgin little girl way to hot.

sassysuzazsassysuzazover 10 years ago
Cant get enough of this story

Im with you anon... I masturbate to this story alot lol. Your sisters are lucky to have you.Rainer... Please....we need more to this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Jacking baby part 2

Just read it again for about the 20th time. Call my sister in Denver and read it too her and we both came so hard. She reminded me of the time we watched my mom give a blow job too our dad. Then we went out to the garage and she went down on me for the first time. God Damm I never shot as much cum as I did that day.

taboolovingfreaktaboolovingfreakover 10 years ago
Hot!

Why does this not have a red H attached to it? It's freakin hot! Oh my god, I can't help read it without stroking!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Oh God....

Hottest Story Ever.

God, I can't count how many times I've read this since I've discovered it...

I know it's been a long time since you posted it, but I need more of this... Please...

Having her daddy fingering her without her knowing it was so hot... ! Her innocence and naivety feels so good, she is such a good little daddy's girl...I think I had a spontaneous orgasm (even more than one (:) !

Please, I need more !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Jacking baby part ten

Goddam been a few months but every time I read this story I cum so much.

XodanXodanalmost 10 years ago
At least 3 read

Like other comments, I'm still as aroused as the first time.

Very well written and very hot story. So very wrong in so many ways.... Wish there is more story of this quality.

Thanks a lot.

AndrewStowAndrewStowalmost 10 years ago
Mind, blown

In-fucking-credible. The construction, remarkable. The concept, brilliant. Truly, an astounding tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Loved it.

Not sure whether it was real or fiction (preferably fiction) but loved it anyway, whichever it was.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
So good

I haven't read a story as good as this one, honestly the best yet!!!! regretted the ending ..... but that's only because it ended. Truly AMAZING!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Got me wet

Great writing, deliciously taboo story. Got me wet pretty quickly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
wow!

This is one of the best stories I've ever read on here !

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Holy fag. This is one of the greatest stories. I came!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
hot

mmmm delicious ...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Jacking again

Fuck it's been over three years and every time I read this I cum so much. Maybe the 20th time now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Amazing.

Perfectly written...wishing for another installment like this. I have read and reread this several times and each time my body spasms harder and harder when I cum. Deliciously written...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Mind blowing

Guaranteed to get me off every single time. I wish i had chrissy's daddy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
So hott

This turned on I'm a female and I used my vibe 3 times to this story

wanderfrostwanderfrostabout 7 years ago
just wish it was longer!

always one of my faves, only wish it was longer ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Arousing ASF

I really love this one! I can't count how many times I've re-read this story, making me cum every time. I wish that I was Chrissy! 5 stars for this story!

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 6 years ago
right on the line

Great story.

The independent woman in me had to keep reminding myself that this was make believe (I hope) and ignore the rapey overtones.

The oversexed pervert in me loved it!

Medical Exams going off script is one of my favorite recurring themes on this site, and you've added a hot incest twist to it.

The full submission makes it hot, and the continued dialogue throughout was very arousing.

The tacit collusion between the dad and doctor also was an interesting twist.

well done. 5*s

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Waw i like it iwant more

Give me more story like this 😍😍😍😍

mezmerizedmezmerizedabout 6 years ago
Honestly...

I've always wondered if this was why men become Ob/Gyn's.. fingers deep, at least 40 hrs a week, and paid shit loads for it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
wonderful story

This story screams for a sequal.

The daughter sucks off the doctor.

Realizes his dad fucked her, & begs him to fuck her every day.

Daughter then fucks Father, Doctor & friend all at once!-EATANDBEMERRY

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

This made me so wet

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Loved the ending !!

I believe every Dad wants to touch and taste and fuck his Daughters, and the only thing that keeps them from doing so is the Wife and the possibility of prison.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Made me cum.

I was wet in anticipation and then couldn’t help myself. Thank you

SoriedemSoriedemover 5 years ago
Wow.

Even though im not a big fan of incest, but still found this a piece of art.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Well, fuck... This made me so horny

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Omfg yeeeeessss yeeeeessss yeeeeeeesssssss I so wish this would've happened to me

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Such an intoxicating read, loved every minute

cindyp1976cindyp1976over 4 years ago
Very hot

I want more of this one

SouthLondonerSouthLondoneralmost 4 years ago
A sexy story but...

Ones imagination really has to be at full stretch to imagine how likely a scenario such as this taking place.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefalmost 4 years ago
Virgin no more...

Poor Chrissy, so young and yet so brain dead not to have figured out what was going on. What chapter two could be is when both the Doctor and Dad got charged with rape and sent to prison where they were both get raped by a big ugly inmate named Chris. Should be a lot of laughs.

Just kidding, it is a hot story but it sure stretches the boundaries of believability.

KreepyKrystaKreepyKrystaabout 3 years ago

Ooof. I wish I had a Daddy like that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I've read this story so many times, and reading the comments only turns me on more so I thought I'd finally day something

This is old as fuck but it still makes me so hot, reading the slow build up as they toy with her pussy makes me so wet, I love the cliche of a naive girl with her legs spread being made to cum without even realize what's being done to her ahhh~

The only thing that would improve this is if they'd made her cum a time or two in the chair before fucking her, instead of the sharp dive into noncon. Telling her it's part of the sensitivity exam so they could play with her even longer... Maybe I should finally write my own ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Fantastically erotic. Wow! I am definitely onboard. So sexy. 5 stars from me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

For certain Dr Perkins fucks his patients, including this mans wife who goes travelling all over.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Any old weird pervs that wanna chat? I really want this to happen to me one day! And I’d love to hear how you’d do it to me ;)

SoftKtty24SoftKtty24about 2 years ago

While I loved it, it was truly rape not just non/con. Loved it and would love another chapter to see where it leads, since the mom is out of town and the dad's realization that the perv doctor has no doubt pulled this on his wife and other patients. More please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Incest sex is the greatest, I've had this with both boys and girls but I loved the girls better and had attempted sex with one, she too was young and it hurt her but it was enjoyable, wanted more but I stopped then later on tried with someone else.

winterplayingwinterplayingalmost 2 years ago

this is in the wrong category. Needs to be under non-consent. I hate it when I start reading a story then have to stop because it's a non-con story. I hate those! Especially with the dad and daughter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This story was great! Very taboo. It could have a sequel where he fucks her back at home. Maybe she wouldn’t know, or maybe she’d resist at first?

roveroneroveroneabout 1 year ago

agree w/Amelia-this is in wrong category, and I have NO interest in rape of a 18 yo virgin...

Doc and dad way more twisted than Johnny coercing a barely legal into giving him a hummer

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Reading this made me so wet. I wish my daddy would fuck me

PFWillyPFWilly21 days ago

Makes me think of what my wife told me about her grandfather and his doctor friend…

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