All Comments on 'Christine: My Sister'

by Dirt Man

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oldwayneoldwayneover 16 years ago
Hot!

Great fantasy, Dirt Man! Keep them coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
get real

get real no guy would put up with that kind of teasing after walking in on her then her walking around in bra and panties if he was really bothered by it like you say then when everyone had gone to bed he would have packed his stuff and gone back to college he sure wouldn't hang around so she could tease him more keep it atleast sounding believable

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
OMFG!!! WOW!!!

Damn, reading that has me soaking wet and horny as hell, Dirt Man. Besides being a sub/slut for my Husband/Master, i have a daughter that is just about as you described his sister, and a younger son as well....and because my Husband enjoys 'sharing' me with VWE and Dom/Aggressive Black Men to use me as they please while He watches, photos, and joins in, I loved everything about this story about her being His slut/slave/whore sister, to her having been used by several Black Men, in all her holes...just like I have.

I hope you keep writing and keep posting stories like this.

hugs and kisses and wet licks

catt

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
agree with get real

a normal guy would have called his college that first evening and found a job and apartment and the next day at breakfast tell the family that he got a call from the college and needs to go back right away then never come back or contact his sister again INCEST IS ONLY GOOD WHEN DONE RIGHT IT NEEDS TO BE LOVING AND REALISTIC YOU CAN'T REWRITE HUMAN NATURE

C_frommnC_frommnover 12 years ago
It Sounds

Like Brither and Sister have plans for the Future. He should be giving her commands to Follow until they can be together full time. like the ass is mine and mine alone.

and having her only doing Dad and getting it on Tape incase they need a little Persuasion to keep Dad in-line when they go After Mom.

good story hope you follow up

CadracCadracover 11 years ago
Wish I Could Read This

The plot setup looked like it might be a pretty good story, but I just couldn't get past the massive overuse of commas where they didn't belong. Unfortunately, as interesting as the story might be, I wasn't able to make myself read any further than the dinner at the beginning of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
cool story

Un like some people I thought it ws awesome realitic or not

TheSeeker84TheSeeker84over 8 years ago
Not bad

but work on your punctuation. You frequently placed commas in places where they do not belong.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Terrible grammar

"Move your ass dear, I know you mother, and father weren’t made of glass. We want to see the damn game!”

What does that even mean??

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not me!

“I lost that at 13, and I’ve had sex with no less than 10 different guys already, including dad..." Don't think I would be attracted to that girl, not even in a dream.

Patch

Anonymous91Anonymous91about 3 years ago

“I lost that at 13, and I’ve had sex with no less than 10 different guys already, including dad..."

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