All Comments on 'Christmas and Mom Ch. 02'

the last scene (next day) should be Friday not the one before it...will fix and submit

Consider this chapter a teaser as it will be the last posted until the story has been completed. Chris's story is evolving in a direction that it makes it difficult for me to constantly update previous posts, so don't be surprised when chapter one of the completed story doesn't match the one posted... new submissions take a week to post and by then I've already edited a chapter three or four different times.... so I won't be posting chapter 3 until the story reaches a point where I can call it finished, at least until the next one begins.

Buddy you have 2 continue

Great story you need to add chapter 3