All Comments on 'Christmas Angel'

I really enjoyed the set-up to this. However, I feel like they came together a little to easily - maybe a bit more anticipation and sexual tension would have made it more believable. And some of the dialogue was cliched. But I think you are a strong writer with good imagination, which puts you head and shoulders above some of the others on this site. I really look forward to reading what you write in the future.