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I literally could not move!
My face was still pressed half into the pillow as my arms and legs twitched erratically and my hips jerked against my mattress as spasms continued to clench the inside muscles of my pussy. My whole body felt like it was on fire and I was burning away to ash. I tried to catch my breath but it wasn't easy!
I felt the bed shift and a moment later Matt fell beside me in a sated, sweaty heap. His breathing was as laboured as mine, perhaps worse, but he could still manage to move properly. He reached over and brushed the hair out of the way, uncovering my sweaty brow and flushed face. My eyes were only half open but I could see him as he took in my image. He gave me a great big, satisfied smile and leant in to kiss my brow.
Leaning back he stared down at me again. "And that, dear little sister, is the first; of many promises; kept!"
Fin.
- COMMENTS
Evilcyn999over 5 years agoOMG... the sensuality, the aggressiveness, the connection between Matt and Mandy, AND the description of Matt’s hard body... I need a Matt in my life!
Great story and well written. Thank you!
SAV12over 5 years agoTHIS IS A VERY GOOD STORYLINE. A PLEASURE TO READ TWICE OR THREE TIMES EVEN. I HOPE YOU CAN STILL WRITE, BECAUSE I SEE IT HAS BEEN AWHILE FOR NEW CHAPTERS. I HOPE YOU CONTINUE.
Olebillover 7 years agoWas a perfect read. Hope you write more of these two as time carries on. What happens next.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoBigdaddyg123 left an insightful, constructive, complimentary comment that mentioned certain aspects of the literature he felt could perhaps, in his opinion, use improvement. And after offering the very definition of dazzlingly -for literotica- articulate constructive criticism, he proceeded to compliment the author and call his work eminently readable, a sentiment that, along with other sentiments in his comment, I happen to be delighted to share. The only overbearing boorishly ignorant, childish and evidently socially impaired troll in this comment thread is you, sir, and we are well rid of you. -longtime lurker, no profile. Grazie.
PS: delightful descriptive work, kush, if I may shorten your name, and truly spasm-inducing command of erotic picture-painting. If there had been an internal shot, say in a later chapter, I would've been over the moon. (I'm a "cum goes on the INSIDE" kinda guy. Facials and body shots are hot and all, but when I think lovemaking, fucking, fast slow tender whatever, what gets me going is the joining of the two into one.) That said, this was hot as hell in the middle of summer. I hope you are still writing! Goddamn!
renogoogirlabout 10 years agoSuper hot second chapter. I had my fingers buried in my pussy the entire time!
octabrainover 10 years agobigdaddyg123 leaves most interesting comments, I read the stories he has read. The man does all right.
Anonymousover 10 years agoHere he is again, writing his incomprehensible troll garbage, trying to dissect the author's thought processes, and bitching because the story didn't go exactly as per his expectations; please delete his wordy, meaningless, wannabe-literary-critic-but-failing-miserably nonsense and tell him to go troll someone else. This story was well written, hot, riveting, and gave me the flushies, it did what it said on the tin, so job done, and done well, five stars.
No more needs to be said, so bigdaddyg123, try and learn that brevity is the soul of communication, not the waffling bilge you routinely indulge in in the hope someone will think you're an intellectual.
writerjabover 10 years agoI loved this second chapter and always find it slightly annoying to read someone being somewhat critical of a writer's work when that reviewer doesn't have a story posted.
I find the characters I create aren't just stiff two-dimensional people, they are as real as the imagination that developed them.
I loved this story and hope I can read a third part at some point. But if not, I'd give this more stars if possible!
