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"Adam...I don't think you were supposed to do that..."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years agoLoved this. Tightly written, but filled my imagination easily.
So vivid with sparse description.
Anonymousover 7 years ago^^^
Plus slide/slid and lots more. Some attention to basic spelling and grammar could have made this a good read - instead, it's an annoying read. (Rule # 1: Don't annoy the reader)
Rapierwit24601over 7 years agoI love your nom de plume.
Do you see yourself more as Electra or Iphigenia?
Anonymousover 7 years agoTenderness, humor, lust, trust, and surprise at the end. Really, a very nice little story. For some of us, a lot closer to real than fiction.
