All Comments on 'Christmas Break Pt. 03'

And that went from five star chapters in 1 &2 to less than 1 really quick. Just what I didnt want to read. Daddys involvement.

yep i agree. dad being added and adam stay around like a little bitch wasnt hot at all. dad was creepy too. wish the mother would find out blow her brains out while elle becomes a common street whor,. dad gets arrested, sodomized in prison and then hangs himself in his cell and adam just starts shooting up to numb the pain.

1 star you ruined the story.

I have to agree with the rest, the story went in the keast desired direction and them just kept spiraling downward. Too bad, I was hoping this was going to be a good series but turned out just a limp cuckold fantasy.

1*-

Part 1 and part 2 excellent, is part 3 even part of the same story? Sorry, not for me

I think u posted wrong story,from love story to slut,how u do that.

You are one sick fuck.

Read the first lines of part 3, not even going to finish the rest. You destroyed a good story. For shame

Waiting to read chapter 4

looking forward to Chapter 4

This was great for 2 chapters, then this ruined it completely.

1 star from me.

is a no no...

You really just are a horrible writer and clueless. This is pathetic and stupid