All Comments on 'Christmas Calamities'

That was a very good story .A wonderful late Christmas present . Liked it very much. Thank you . Gave it a 5 and a place in my favorite page . Keep writing and I'll keep reading .

This was a very good story and I really enjoyed it. Please continue on with the story of this family. I would like to read more about it.

I really enjoyed your story! Thought it was hot and can't wait to read more of your stuff. However, I think you went a little overboard with your euphemisms as well as your use of channel and tunnel. I loved the rest though, keep writing!

Thank you for your comments. And your criticism is duly noted. I will remember to tone down the euphemisms in later tales. Thanks for pointing it out, I didn't notice it when writing it but I did use cock or cunt or other regular terms rather infrequently in this one. I will keep it in mind, however, channel is MY favorite term so I do tend to use it more than many others.

And this one is no different. I'll be reading this one Multiple times I assure you.

Please follow up with this story - there is so much potential here that it would be a shame to not pursue any and all possibilities.

Another awesome story. I too would enjoy more!

Tiki: this is a great story. Beautiful tone, great build up great hot action - pay off at the end. There is an over riding tone of love that really creates a very special and sweet dynamic. Absolutely love this

Best story I have read in a while