All Comments on 'Christmas in Zonei Pt. 07'

story is awesome.. keep it coming

This is such a beautiful story. Beautiful erotica, beautiful SF, beautiful romance... altogether it's just great, beyond any literary genre. Standing ovation.

Love every second of this story. I read a lot of books. Sometimes going through 10 novels a month. I check here regularly to see if my favorite stories have any new chapters. Can't wait till the next chapter!!

TM

How can someone be so talented? Please next chapter next chapter. epic story

How CAN anyone be so talented? Hehe. I'll admit, I read the last 3 chapters on the Lit app on my phone, and for whatever silly reason, you can only vote on the app, but not comment. And then I come home at the end of the day and forget to comment, because I have the short-term memory of a goldfish.

So here was another great cliffhanger of a chapter. I liked Kim's freakout at seeing Raeden fully morfed and causing extensive carnage. I think the easy path a lot of authors would have taken would have been having Kim be all, "Oh great! You're here! Thanks!" But really, a person would freak out if they saw a severed head on the floor, so thanks for keeping it real (as real as it can get with a giant lizard man in the room!). Also really enjoyed the intro bit with the Dylan guy (is that the right name?) and a slice of his routines, enough to show us that Raeden's activities were not going unnoticed, so the reader can expect some drama to come on that front. Also liked the variety you gave to the personalities of the quents, which we got to see via Kim's picking up on their thoughts. It would have been easy to just make them all anonymous, single-note baddies, but even in the short glimpse of them we got, they were all individuals. I feel like there were probably more awesome things I noticed while I was reading, but alas, that was while I was at work, and now I'm home, and hey - what am I doing in the kitchen again? See what I mean? What year is this? Who's the president? Ronald Reagan? The ACTOR? Anyway, swank job once again. Excited for more. 5 stars

OMG, ur great... Really really great. I thought the linked minds idea was already done in hypnotic. But still, great story. Who am I kidding???? Awesome story!!!