by logophile
Imaginative and well plotted. A hot, fun read. Keep up the good work.
Rumple
Wow, your story was great! Loved the thought of them still being friends/lovers after everything
Lovin' it! A LOT of heat contained in a short story! Well done. ~Imp
This was such a beautiful and sexy story, I am almost sorry I'm not a lesbian.
Good luck.
Very artsy in the use of the film colors...
How could two loves restrain such passion!?!
Ill have to think about this for awhile, and I promise Ill get back to you!
-Lv
Wonderfully written, nostalgic, and a bit sad. Just the perfect length as well...however, I'm interested in the husbands reactions. Will they find about their past together, suspect, become angry, or be happy? Hm...
There just has to be a sequel to this one, logo! Just as the two women kept their passion going through the years, so should they let their husbands know of it eventually, and enjoy the 'consequences.' It could be fun! GOOD JOB!
That was a fun read. I really got into all of the hot action. Somehow the photographer being silent and just taking pictures was really hot. He simplied witnessed and captured the moment of lust, friendship, and passion on film at the moment when it was conceived. Good job.
one of the best ive read. made my pussy amazingly wet. you should write a sequal.