All Comments on 'Christmas Present'

by Pelaam

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Hot

This was sweet, fun and hot. I hope we get more adventures from these boys.

katenakatenaover 16 years ago
poitr?

i believe you meant piotr. there is no such name as poitr in polish. the story's as good as usual though

MilliemoonMilliemoonover 16 years ago
Another Great Story

This was a hot read. Loved it.

Millie

taxpapabobtaxpapabobover 15 years ago
Downhill Ski to Loving

You always write a fine HOT SEX story. And this is another goodie. But as one who knows Polish, I am furious that you butcher a common name -- it is Piotr, NOT Poitr. Shame! But I still love you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

A simply lovely story.

dinkybootsdinkybootsalmost 12 years ago

if its a series.? should nt the story follow .? these dont. therefore there not a series.?

sm1982sm1982over 8 years ago
Loved it!

This is a great start to a love story where they both secretly love the other person but seriously believes they don't have a chance. Great way of having them figure out they want each other. Whether the name is Poitr or Piotr, there are plenty of people with the spelling the author chose to use who are Polish!

Anyway, looking forward to reading the next chapter!

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