All Comments on 'Christmas Theives'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wonderful!

I love the (too quick cumming) main character! I hope there's another story or seven to come with this same concept! Work on consistent verb tense. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
meh

Okay, this is gross and unethical. It misunderstands how the law works. And it's stumpy and not well drawn out. Not a success.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wish I had those powers... ;O)

At least you didn't kill them

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I was happy to read that Adam would be the bottom. I’d love to read details about Dan fucking the muscular stallion’s virgin ass, but unfortunately the wizard left too soon. :)

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I've been writing erotic stories since 2015 now and have found that my style is usually focused on a loss of control for the main character. This can be humiliation, accidental exposure, mind control, or forced experiences. They're not always sexual explicitly but many are. I...

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