All Comments on 'Christmas Window'

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 6 years ago
Very nice story

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Luxurious Liquor?

What on earth is “luxurious liquor”??? Is it possible to be any more generic? Please go back and try to at least get a handle on freshman composition.

live4thebjlive4thebjover 6 years ago
Just bad

But to make matters worse that line about surprisingly big tits. You can't tell when she is wearing a shirt? Lame! *

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Just RUBBISH

Enough said

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
What?

First of its not even Christmas yet lol second you could of told the story a little better. You rushed and meet up on some parts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
What Language?

What language was this originally written in, before it was appallingly badly translated to English?

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