All Comments on 'Christmas Wishes'

by krysm

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AsymbiiAsymbiiover 12 years ago
CUTE

I thought it was so freaking cute. I just loved the way the story turned out. Just beautifully cute.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Adorable

I agree. I liked the way it ended. It was an adorable story. Original.

ZombieQueenZombieQueenover 12 years ago
creepy

that is so creepy a la twilight. Must scrub brain with soap.

krysmkrysmover 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks and ?

Thank you, Anonymous and Asymbii, for your positive comments. I appreciate it.

I normally don't do this, but dear Zombie Queen, as I have neither read the Twilight series nor seen the movies, would you care to explain your comment?

nomoretears00nomoretears00over 12 years ago
Cute

Liked how you made it a love story when it could have been, very easily, just fucking. I liked it.

TimothyMTimothyMalmost 12 years ago

Fun and sweet and jolly, just like Christmas. And I liked the idea that unselfish wishes were the ones Santa just had to fulfill.

curiousfemmecuriousfemmeover 11 years ago
Cute and Creative

Very enjoyable! Although, I just have to say: Testicles the size of avocados?????

allie43442allie43442over 10 years ago
Awe!

Oh my goodness!!! That was just so freaking cute!!! This so needs a sequel; I would love to see how the elves treat Tim and how he adapts to the North Pole! :D

PrincessLeeLeePrincessLeeLeealmost 9 years ago
Cute

Santa needs love, too

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Loved your use of words

well written, well selected verse, like a Christmas tale Dickens would write

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

UTTER RUBBISH

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I agree with anon

It's utter rubbish... And I LOVED every minute of it. Lol. I love this story. I've read it probably half a dozen times, and I'll continue coming back to read it. It's lovely and sweet.

JadecatlystJadecatlystover 8 years ago
Love this.

This story is a gift.

DudebulgeDudebulgeabout 8 years ago
Every Christmas

I try to read your story, or at least, near Christmas! It's such a sweet telling and you describe Santa perfectly, as just the big masculine hunk I always knew he was. Easily one of my favorite reads on this site. Thanks so much!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
The only thing missing for Santa now

Is children, but pounding a pregnant Timmy would be amazing. Wouldn't it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
holy crap anon's right

Santa fucking a pregnant Timmy got me hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
So sweet

I just live this story

HartlesslyHartlesslyover 3 years ago

Me: wtf did I just read?

Also me: I loved this! Better than a Hallmark movie to get you in the spirit!

prosserelizabethprosserelizabeth5 months ago

I love this hot sexy Santa story I read it every year!

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