All Comments on 'Christmas with the Cleaning Lady'

I realy enjoyed this story--the older lady wins and the young gold digger loses--he wins they loose---he now will have some happeness.

Winner hands down! This is the best story I've ever read!!!! Love it! Keep em coming sethp!

I especially like it when authors beg for comments. This was a good story. Wishing you good luck in the contest.

not your old typical style... you have come a long way since you started writing the wank-off stories you did; not that I didnt like them! but this is taking it to another level with more details about feelings thoughts and such:)

great job!

Now back to work you slob!!;)

Way to go, seth, good entry. I really enjoyed it, you perv. Good luck in the contest!

really good, a hot story with a happy ending, like it or not. Sometimes we don't know what we really want until we stumble across it.

carry on writing more incest / mature stories

Nice story! I wish I had an office cleaning lady like that to fuck!

The story is incomplete. Too many questions need answering. You need another chapter or two. It's a very good beginning.

this is the hottest story I have read in a long time. So it is not a literary masterpiece...Who cares???? It has all that is necessary for a good, but not prolonged buildup, buildup. You connected with all my trigger points with your description of Nadine. I have known, but have not bedded, sexy women just like her...My loss !!!!

Fucked his way out of his employment - what a way to go out.

This piece is worth reading... Every Christmas. :D

The ending had a smooth flow that I liked

What I read was an excellent beginning. There are so many possibilities for this story that it's a crime to end it. I'm tempted to continue this story myself.

Damn I wish there was more

11/10 Candy Canes!!!!!

Santa was good to Steve. He brought him the ultimate Christmas present- LOVE. Too bad she couldn't give him babies!

***** Damn that was very entertaining. Thanks for sharing.

There was no Christmas joy in her expression. It was all bah humbug and Grinch-who-stole-Christmas. Lollol. Thank you for another great work of art.

The most beautiful Christmas miracle in history