by TamLin01
Very Enjoyable. Very Well Written. Great Imagination. Dialogue and Rhyme on Spot!
Do You write professionally or are You a scholar?
i'm quite curious if You'd share how long it took to compose and edit this Holiday Tale?
Very cute story of a different nature. Imaginative and nicely done. This took a great deal of thought and time. Good Luck in the competition.
Really enjoyed it. Novel, interesting - generally five +++ stars.
Loved the premise, the rhyming prose, the mythological references. The scenes, and the pacing! My favorite holiday story so far!
What a fun, novel, and intriguing story! I signed up on Literotica just so I could favorite and comment on this story.
Я рад что прочитал эту историю. Оно подняли мне все, в том числе и настроение))) спасибо автору.
If this was a movie, it'd be my new xmass tradition. Right next to A Nightmare before xmass and a xmass charol. ^_^
It should be published in a children's book style too, with cute naughty drawings.
I'd totally buy that if it was on kindle. Or printed. Lol