by OrpheusRadius
Are you serious? "If this is real"? You are are on an erotic fiction website. 99.9% of these stories aren't real. If you think otherwise, I'm a bit worried your delusional.
As for this story, this was not a bad story. I like stories that break down people's inhibitions and this was an effective way to do that. It seemed a bit rushed, but since this was your first story, that's no big deal. Please keep going.
Yes, head injury can cause this type of change in personality (and behaviour). Particularly with oppressed sexuality and/or strict/religious upbringing. So it could all be true ..
Some of events (instigated by the author) are not easily excusable, and I would be surprised if this led to a long-term relationship. So, it is probably mostly fiction ..
is exactly what this asshole is! Even in OR's mind this fuckwad deserves to be denutted. .......And by the way auburn blonde hair wtf! Plus fuckwad when he first tried to fuck Christy in her room he got up and shut and locked the door to her bedroom how could her father just open the door? Riddle me that! So far this story just makes me want to kick fuckwad in the nuts.....hoping it improves.
WOW. Raping a brain damaged, basically mentally incapacitated young woman.
What a shit story.