All Comments on 'Chronicles of a Runner Ch. 00'

by Alivitari

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Lots of potential

You're off to a good start.Shoulda maybe made the lead a couple years older tho.

AlivitariAlivitariabout 16 years agoAuthor
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This story is based partly in fact, trumped up with fiction. If I made the lead older then it would no longer MY story, it would be more fiction that truth and that is not the point. Also, someone e-mailed that the idea of 16 million dollars for running was unrealistic. I have a reply to that. It was an unrealistic lifestyle. The amounts were right what I changed, for my own protection, was the quantity.

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