All Comments on 'Chronicles of Chris Ch. 10'

I can't believe this is based on a real person’s life. If so, call me impressed.

love the series and hope for more chapters.

my did his basic at grt. lks. and a school at millington in the 60s. my sis and i were born at millington in the 70s and my dad retired there in the 90s. i gotta say i was hoping he would beable to keep joni and maybe sara in a 3 way romance. hint hint.

maybe he can some how end up back in his home town and see jodi agian and she still would be single or divorced and end up with her in the end

Lets go already!

It would be nice if you finished this story. It feels incomplete.....to say the least.

CONGRATULATIONS AGAIN. Excellent writing great character development. IMHO you miss a chance to turn this great story into a marvelous story. It's fiction. It does not need to follow your brother's life story to a tee. It would be so much sexier and satisfying to old romantics like me if in CH 8 Chris were to realize he cannot live without Joni and went on leave between assignments to offer Joni the chance to share his life as low-paid enlisted man. Many more sexual encounters later Joni can decide if great sex is enough to build a life on -- OR NOT -- it's your story. I joined the Navy in 1960, Got married in 1961, right out of A school retired in 1983 and celebrated my 52nd anniversary last year. My sex life is nothing like Chris's but it could have been and in fiction there's no reason why not. Having said all that, your story telling is second to none. I've enjoyed all your stories so far. Please keep them coming

This has been a nice story to read, but I felt it a little bit short on an actual plot. It might just be me that feels that way, but the way you described this coming-of-age story made me think that there would be more than just a number of hot girls and women that Chris kept working through one after another. That's why I gave you a rating of 4/5 stars, because the writing was very well done and the sex scenes felt hot, but the plot was lacking.

Our 'super' hero had to fuck everything with a cunt ... even the camp slut ... Every STD in the book including AIDS.

To the 9/12/15 anonymous commenter. First of all, grow a pair and leave your name. Second of all, this was the early seventies and the outbreak of AIDS did not start in earnest until the early eighties. Thirdly, this is fucking porn and you are supposed to have an element of "suspension of disbelief" when reading it. Lastly, this is the lightly fictionalized story of my younger brother who is fifty four years old, alive, quite well and has never had an STD.

Do you think that you will continue this story?

Tremendous series. First I have read of Cabone. Skilled writer in language/grammar and in telling an intriguing story. 5 stars for that.

But I do not like unfinished stories. This needs a resolution. So much story and emotion were devoted to Joni that it is frustrating to not hear of their eventual reconnection. Even if it has to leave historicity and veer into fantasy. It would be satisfying. It would turn this marvelous series into one of the really exceptional greats of Literotica. It's not too late.

Paul in Oklahoma

This superb story is a gripping drama of complex relationships and romantic encounters, superbly penned by Cabone. Unfortunately, it has been left unfinished, and needs to be resolved. With all the thank that readers can give the author, the author also needs to finish the series for the readers. Five stars.

I really hope Cabone finish this story, especially with a fairy tale ending where chris; roni and sarah all live happily ever after