All Comments on 'Chronicles of Danny Ch. 16'

by bbettyblambabam

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ShyExposureShyExposureabout 8 years ago
Interesting plot twist...

To see Ashley go from nice helpful lover to ending up Delforge's flunky. Granted, not by choice because Delforge threatened her future, but she should have risked her future to bring such a corrupt and evil woman down. Instead, she fell back onto old sorority teachings, such as "I only look out for me to protect myself". I wonder if she'll continue being a detriment, or if she'll turn around again?

bbettyblambabambbettyblambabamabout 8 years agoAuthor
we'll see!

I have one more chapter for this series before i give it a bit of a break and work on Blood and Magic, but when I do return Ashley will make appearances still :).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
While you're at it

How about finding a way to take out "Mommy Dearest" out in a big way, she certainly deserves it; and in as humiliating way as possible after what she "pulled" on the woman she caused to resign. Hopefully when Kara gets "delt" with, you make it monumental & epic. Not enough bad and shameful things can befall her. Looking forward to it.

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