All Comments on 'Chronicles of Heather Maureen Ch. 05'

Ive enjoyed the 1st 4 parts of your story but it felt like this was more of a summary/epilogue. There was definitely enough points of intrest in this last chapter that you couldve expanded upon to make it as good/long as the previous parts buts thats just my opinion.

Im hoping that the reason you wrapped things up in this way is that you feel your done with the Marty time in Heathers life & wish to write about the rest of her experiences, if so i for 1 will be reading.

It would've been nice to include the weekend camping trip that was mentioned in an earlier chapter.