All Comments on 'Chrysander's Mate'

I laughed and smiled at the end, best ending yet! Thanks Avid....

Haha that story was hilarious, cute, sweet, entertaining, captivating....and many other words that my vocabulary cannot think of. I loved the arrogance of Chrysander and I also loved that Alec took him down a few notches. Can't wait for your next story. Cheers :D

need a 10 star to click not a 5 one - sometimes 5 just isn't enough.

Avid this story is well written, innovative, original and downright hot!!

simply Brilliant.

well done and you deserve to win with this one.

good luck

Amber

Avid, that is possibily the best piece you have ever written. The humor, the need, the fear... the love shown in this was outstanding. Holy hell, Avid! Five stars just don't cover what this is worth... because *this* is worth winning.

~M

This story made me smile, laughed, and sad all at the same time. Totally AWESOME read!! So well written and error free....nice..nice! Truly enjoyed the scorching sex too...now, that's so HOT!! Now, if you can just hurry up and post the other one for your other story...that'd be PHENOMENAL!! :) See...waiting isn't one of my good virtues. LOL.

This story is a WINNER and I really, really hope that you win it!! Good luck and keep on writing!!

Cheers!! (: So love all of your work! Totally AWESOME!!! :)

Okay went back and the only thing you said was "just finished a short story for the Earth Day Contest"; you could have said, "just finsished the most amazing story you will ever read, if you miss it you're loss sucker!"

Or something like that. I am blown away, you bullseyed great with this story. Extremely well done!

I don't normally like gay male stories but the fact it was somewhat of a sci-fi story was a turn on. Great job and good luck in the contest.

this story was great nd the ending had me howlin

thank you so much for your wonderful story.

i always enjoy reading your stories, you're one of the best!

Have I told you lately that I love you?

Your stories are so good ... I love a story that makes me laugh out loud

This was a really enjoyable story. I loved the characters and it was well-written. The only thing I would have questioned was when did they realize they were mates? One moment Chrys is looking at another guy who he didn't realize was Kestro and the next he's referring to alec as his mate when they start making out. I guess I'd have liked to see the process of them realizing what they were to each other. I'd also have loved them to have a more tender moment and tell each other they love one another but I guess the way it came out was fitting given that warrior Chrys would be less likely to vocalize his feelings and Alec was too shy and afraid of rejection to. These are just small things I thought about while I was reading. They certainly weren't things that detracted from the story. Good luck with the contest. It certainly is perfect for Earth day!

maybe you could do another like it. :-)

Good luck with the earth day contest!

Happy Writing!

I really enjoyed the descriptions throughout the story. :) Good luck!!

OMG! soooo friggin good im actually speechless about what i can say after this...............Oh i know lol, this storie defiantly deserves to win the contest one of the best on this site with out a doubt :) xoxo

YOU!!!! I LOVED IT.... YOU SHOULD WIN...maybe make a sequel? anyways always love your stories!!!

=)

N

You got my vote. Good luck in the contest, Avid.

Like I said, it's trite. Others may disagree.

Really, really love this one.

I don't think I have laughed that hard in ages! Very nicely done, well put-together. I'd give you 10 stars if I could!

I LOVED THE ENDING. i hope therer will be more