All Comments on 'Cigarettes, Paper ...You? Ch. 01'

I think im going to enjoy reading about Jasmine!

loved it, congratulations. look forward to more.

You should make it a series!

Nice job on your first story - you deserve the good score your story is getting but damn if you haven't taken her anal flower already in the first chapter, just where do we go from here?

Very good first story.

i should say, uber-hot. Well-written and expertly managed. I love this series, and hope you continue. Sizzling stuff. Thank you for a great story.

Delightful. So sexy. You might like my story entitled Desert Festival. Great writing. Five stars.