All Comments on 'Cinder Whore Ch. 02'

Gee, both psychological and physical abuse, incest (well, I expected that) rape,

you sure are a fun person. This is just sick..why don't they just kill her and be done with it ! Step away from your computer and write no more. This is just disgusting !

LOVED it! keep going PLEASE!

Wow. I've had it with seeing people spewing hate all over people's stories. But just in case you aren't trolling: this is a fantasy. A way to explore your mind in a creative way. Everyone has fetishes, and others may find yours just as disgusting as you find this one (and the author has the appropriate tags, like non-con and incest, what did you expect?!). LaSalia has put an effort in this, and I think it's one of the better-written stories, with attention to grammar, continuity etc.

I was delighted to find a sequel, and I enjoy this series. I mean, I can understand if you personally didn't enjoy the story, and expressed what you thought were flaws. But a personal attack on the author? Not cool dude. Just because we're anons doesn't mean we can be thoughtless or rude.

I wanted to speak up because I hope LaSalia isn't discouraged by these kinds of messages. I'd like to read more of her stories.

AMEN to that!

Voted 5.

[...not all Anons are trolls...]

I like it when her father is gentle with her :) it gives me chills.

The actual storyline is interesting and would hold value only if you would stop repeating everybody's doing the same thing to this girl over and over and over. There's nothing creative about your writing there's nothing interesting it's the same thing I've gone this far and I'm not going any further because I'm tired of reading the same thing for God's sake if you are a writer or I want to be writer take some classes and learn how to write a good story