All Comments on 'Cinderfella Pt. 02'

Since Jamie was still having sex with step-family you could have stayed in the Taboo category.

Good story, though pure irony that he's now being treated the same way they hate being treated themselves by the men around them: purely as a sex object. True it's slightly different since they're close due to being family, however it doesn't change the end result and I hope they learn so it doesn't ruin relationships. It's also ironic because had Ella given in and returned those feelings Lauren never would've gotten her chance, so Ella has nobody else to blame (just don't tell her that lol). Looking forward to reading the next part.