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Bob_Aganoushalmost 14 years agoA good story, but desperately in need of editing
just a couple of examples:
". . .such nice feminine hands and fingers! So confidant"
". . .she could see the crowed areas around the perimeter."
Clean these up and you'll have a much better story
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoThis story is beautifuly written and I would like to hear more about this story.
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