by djubre666
i liked it......and will read more.....but you made the girls a tad too tall......around 6ft would have maintained much more realism......now 7+ footers........just way too much.......still....its your story ....write it as you wish......just my .02
I really like this story, and the larger then life quality of the girls adds a fun dimension. Can't wait for your next chapter in this story.