All Comments on 'Cindy and Mindy Ch. 04'

loving it........keep em coming.....:) .....although we are in the realm of serious fantasy with the girls sizes now.....heh

Typos aren't bad and grammer is good.I however am wondering if chris is going to be deflowered by either ,or both Cindy and Mindy

Good stuff. can't wait to see what Cindy does to him next.

Nice story, but OMG so badly written! I can barely read at all, nearly every word is misspelled.

The story itself is fine, but auto-spell correct is not your friend. Either turn it off or at the very least proofread your works after it gets done screwing them up, before you submit them. In many cases, the auto-correct causes errors much worse than simple typos. I have to stop and figure out what the hell the word was supposed to be. It makes for a difficult read.

I can just tell Chris and Cindy's evening together in the next chapter will be even hotter than their day together.

That second paragraph made me really laugh !

And all the random 'splatts' are brilliant.

A very entertaining and funny story !