All Comments on 'Cindy the Cure'

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NC22371NC22371over 8 years ago
Ok, for a first chapter.

It was OK. You really should use spellcheck, and proofread before submitting. Spellcheck will catch words spelled incorrectly, but not words used incorrectly.

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