All Comments on 'Cindy's Humble Servant Ch. 01'

This is totally hot!! Love the total humiliation here... more please!

I think the girls need to take over his company next, force him to sign it over to them and make him into the miniskirted, obedient secretary.

I love how you write! Please continu this story, it's so well writting and sexy as hell!

There's potential here. You are good at creating believable characters and making an inherently unrealistic scenario seem believable. But the story switches randomly between between first person ("I") and third person ("Peter"), and at one point Brian's name seems to change to "Collin" and then back again. This could use a good editing.