All Comments on 'Circle of Love Pt. 03'

If only most women felt that way, and "love" was so easy to start up, share, and let go without pain. If it is true love, as opossed to lust, pain is a part of it. This story could use a bit of editing. Also there are some details missing; the protagonist has a vasectomy, but what aout Jim? You should describe Jim a bit better too.

Some may read and think most women aren't like the ones in this story. They could be. Once anyone opens to the possibility of really loving relationships like the ones in this tale are possible. I've known a few, been in a few, am in a few. Thanks.

What a great expanding circle. reading this is a joy.

Write on! On to chapter 4

"...both Jim and June announced their orgasms and then had their climaxes in a predictable sequence of physical moves and audible expressions." This is erotica? I like the way you write, but can't we get a little more steamy when sex is involved?

Hope so!