All Comments on 'Cities of Power Ch. 06'

Please i Love your other stories but would love to see Calliope's story continued .

You know when a show gets cancelled midway through a season and suddenly they have to fit all of remaining story into 4 episodes? The story is starting to feel like that.

The scenes jump from place to place relentlessly driving the story forward with nothing in-between. It's the in-between where the character development should be happening but isn't.

This chapter in particular added too many characters that I either can't remember being introduced because it was so brief, or they were just thrown into dialogue as if they were.

Take my criticism as constructive and I apologize for the anonymous post, I freely admit that I am too lazy to create an account.

Calliope's story was the first story of yours I ever read. It made me fall madly in love with you and your writing. I would love to see it properly concluded. I like this story much more than I expected...i typically steer clear of "sci-fi", but I've very much enjoyed this series.

A black brick lost his head , if that would be so easy in RL too so we could end wars before they starting ….. thats an absolute intense sensational chapter ….. extraordinary

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This is absolutely superb, I am seriously hooked.