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thisguyrightherethisguyrighthereabout 9 years ago
Mmm... toasty.

A damn fine story and hot enough to make toast!

Sure would like to see a continuation, but, as with all things, if it must come to an end, then let it be so.

I'll keep an eye out for more of your stories. Ta for now.

AlinaXAlinaXabout 9 years agoAuthor

Great that you liked it.

Thanks for reading & commenting!

Jfra18Jfra18about 9 years ago
Loved it

I could read a lot more

cavalier68cavalier68over 5 years ago
well written

you have a poets gift for erotic description (and non erotic) i cannot wait to read more

AlinaXAlinaXover 5 years agoAuthor

My gift for poetry is too oft corrupted by my love of the absurd.

But I hope you enjoy my stories & poems anyway.

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I like writing stories that are erotic without sacrificing plot and character. I like pushing consensual boundaries. I like novelty and I like perversity... Anyone wishing to do audio versions of my stories is welcome to do so - but please acknowledge the source and send me a...