All Comments on 'Claiming Raven'

The first story I've read of yours. You are an outstanding writer. And hot.

Outstanding attention to detail... thoughts, thoughts about thoughts, nuances, the interplay between intent and reality... An enthralling read. Thank you. :)

I love the view into the mind of man who finds himself to be Dominant. An honest look at the journey. Thank you.

Page 4 (near end of page) stopped me from reading this. A DOM--as in D/s would not leave his sub alone and not "safe". Especially if he just met her for the first time, to go down and get a knife to cut panties...come on! Somehow you missed the point in D/s. I know it is a "story" and not "true" D/s. But even a tiny bit of research would show you not all girls will drop to their knees within moments of meeting "him". D/s is about "trust". With her trusting him to make the right/safe/sane decisions, and he not breaking that trust, yet pushing her to the edge of her limits and his own. A "first meet" is important--finding out who each other is--and feeling the "vibes" to see if there is a physical connection. I'm sorry, I could not read the rest of the story...sorry. Otherwise your other stories are VERY good and I recommend them. My apologies for being critical.