All Comments on 'Claire'

by demure101

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DawnJDawnJalmost 12 years ago
"Please sir, I want more!"

Oliver had nothing on Miss Claire, did he? A cute story, and I like the way your imagination works. to have a man dressing up in women's clothing, out of necessity not desire, and moving from discomfort to acceptance, is quite an idea.

feraldaveferaldaveover 9 years ago
thank you

i enjoyed your story, and think it flowed well

the idea of hero / bystander worked well for me , a nice change from boy saves girl or other way round

i also liked the idea of unexpected pleasure, found in places one never thought to go

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