by demure101
Oliver had nothing on Miss Claire, did he? A cute story, and I like the way your imagination works. to have a man dressing up in women's clothing, out of necessity not desire, and moving from discomfort to acceptance, is quite an idea.
i enjoyed your story, and think it flowed well
the idea of hero / bystander worked well for me , a nice change from boy saves girl or other way round
i also liked the idea of unexpected pleasure, found in places one never thought to go