All Comments on 'Claire Jumps My Daisy Dukes'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
keep baby

Claire needs to keep the baby, and move in with Matt. She also needs to marry Matt, and have at least another 12 babies by him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Baby killers

He hoped she becomes pregnant, then when she does he's immediately ready to help her get an abortion! How much sense is there in that?!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You have a great scenario and two interesting but not fully developed characters. Fronting up to Claire's partner creates several possible outcomes and most of them don't involve abortion. Plenty of material for one or more chapters to this tale.

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