All Comments on 'Clare'

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ClavinMobClavinMobabout 4 years ago
Solid read!

Wish there was more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

It belongs in mind control...imagine John as Clare gets to liking all the sucking etc, then they switch back to original bodies as if no time has passed. Now John wants the poly relationship.

PerilEyesPerilEyesabout 9 years ago
Like the premise

I just wonder...if he becomes Clare, what happens to John. Or the physical body of John and anyways. So many questions!

BCTgirlBCTgirlover 9 years ago
I liked it

this was fun to finger myself to

Marine_GirlMarine_Girlover 9 years ago
wait what?

Shouldn't this be in sci-fi/fantasy being a gender bender as aposed to mind control?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Weird in a "Eeeeewwwww!"-sort of way.....

.....now all you have to do is finish the story, clear up all the loose ends and take us where we've never been before.

Are you up for that? Then I'll stay on long enough for that ride......but.....ohhheeww.

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