by aubreyjudge
You are a very good writer, creating characters full or mirth and humor and sexiness. At the same time, believable, with dialogue that smoothed the narration along and gave the story that overall sex appeal.
This line I especially loved, "This was religion and Robert had converted suddenly and irrevocably—he was a true believer. He never wanted to stop the worship, he never wanted to take his cock out of Christie's divine and slippery cathedral."
That's just the gospel of what it's like to succomb to those darker sexual desires once in your life. A whole new beginning.
The only complaint was the abrupt, somewhat pointless ending. Other than that -- bravo!
This was brilliant. You're a great writer; there's a lot more to this story than shagging. I love the languidness that's a part of everything in it, and the surreality you've captured... Man. Good story. Thanks.